Design Practice 2: Film: 2nd Edit
Shift Edit 4 from Jordan Brooks on Vimeo . The latest edit for our design practice two project: SHIFT New additions: - Sound correction to the opening scene. - Correction to the 'shift' title transition. - Straight cuts added to the reception scene for better flow. - Envelope scene shortened to keep audiences interest. - Postbox scene shortened. - Corrections to the night time alley way scene such as: a more fast-paced, continuous set of movements displayed by camera cuts and a correction to a continuity error with the bag. - An overall contrast increase to the entire film, to create the dark film noir look and feeling. - An alternative ending, makes more sense in terms of movement of the characters and also creates a better sense of equilibrium from the start scene. The still image with wind has been replaced by the much more effective fade to black with a gunshot noise and a slow motion drop of the hat. Possible further improvements: - The addition of voice overs to es...